Changes

Jump to navigation Jump to search
Line 27: Line 27:  
* Can you make the article as [[NPOV]] as possible. i.e. when I read "Web and 'Happy Hour' is our way of giving back", I assume that this is text copied from their website and in their words.
 
* Can you make the article as [[NPOV]] as possible. i.e. when I read "Web and 'Happy Hour' is our way of giving back", I assume that this is text copied from their website and in their words.
 
* Also, is the Happy Hour thing really that significant to take up that much of the article?  Have we covered other important facets of the company? [[User:Ray|Ray]]
 
* Also, is the Happy Hour thing really that significant to take up that much of the article?  Have we covered other important facets of the company? [[User:Ray|Ray]]
 +
 +
: I made a few edits here as well.  Take a look at what I did?  http://icannwiki.com/index.php?title=Dotster&action=history Please let me know if you have questions.  [[User:TedErnst|TedErnst]] 16:42, 1 October 2010 (UTC)
259

edits

Navigation menu