User:Saassoln: Difference between revisions

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# [[DT]]-CP - The drafting team process section is unclear, '''edited'''

# [[EC]]-CP - EC and ICANN section is unclear, '''edited'''

# [[ETSI]]-CP - strategic goals section unclear, '''edited'''

# [[ETSI]]-CP - strategic goals section unclear, '''edited''' comment on your talk page titled batch 1 edit

# [[FAG]]-CP - the changes section seems irrelevant if we don't know what the changes are being applied to. Can you make a section explaining the different modules?, '''edited'''

# [[GPML]]-CP this article could use more clarification. It's not clear how the GMPL and New TLDs are related.

# [[IAHC]]-CP. Some parts of article are unclear, especially in the introduction. Article needs more sources.'''edited'''

# [[IESG]]-CP. The role section requires more clarification. We need to know what the internet standards process is before we can understand how it related to IESG.

# [[IESG]]-CP. The role section requires more clarification. We need to know what the internet standards process is before we can understand how it related to IESG.'''edited''', added new section Internet Standards Process

# [[INTA]]-CP. The last paragraph needs more clarification. What is the "overreaching issue" being discussed?'''edited'''

# [[URL]]-CP - Article is unclear.

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 # [[DT]]-CP - The drafting team process section is unclear, <font color="red">'''edited'''</font>
 # [[EC]]-CP - EC and ICANN section is unclear, <font color="red">'''edited'''</font>
-# [[ETSI]]-CP - strategic goals section unclear, <font color="red">'''edited'''</font>
+# [[ETSI]]-CP - strategic goals section unclear, <font color="red">'''edited''' comment on your talk page titled batch 1 edit</font>
 # [[FAG]]-CP - the changes section seems irrelevant if we don't know what the changes are being applied to. Can you make a section explaining the different modules?, <font color="red">'''edited'''</font>
 # [[GPML]]-CP this article could use more clarification. It's not clear how the GMPL and New TLDs are related.
 # [[IAHC]]-CP. Some parts of article are unclear, especially in the introduction. Article needs more sources.<font color="red">'''edited'''</font>
-# [[IESG]]-CP. The role section requires more clarification. We need to know what the internet standards process is before we can understand how it related to IESG.
+# [[IESG]]-CP. The role section requires more clarification. We need to know what the internet standards process is before we can understand how it related to IESG.<font color="red">'''edited''', added new section Internet Standards Process</font>
 # [[INTA]]-CP. The last paragraph needs more clarification. What is the "overreaching issue" being discussed?<font color="red">'''edited'''</font>
 # [[URL]]-CP - Article is unclear.