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# [[Westlake Consulting]]-CP - please add references for the end of the WCL and ICANN section

# [[Yahoo]]-CP - History of Yahoo section needs to be expanded. "Afterwards, Yahoo! never looked back." etc is not adequate. Please do the research. A good way to build this section is to find out when Yahoo acquired all of the companies listed in the acquisitions section. Please do not use Wikipedia as a source. Also, I think Yahoo has more services than just the ones you listed.

# [[WTO]] - CP - Please expand the history section to include [http://www.wto.org/english/thewto_e/whatis_e/tif_e/fact4_e.htm this page]. There are also many other pages under "basics" in the side bar (click the plus beside to it expand) that would be helpful to include. In addition, this page could also use a "WTO and ICANN" section. Many possible sources come up upon googling. As a sidenote, a good way to avoid ~~plagiarization~~ is to read everything before you start writing, and then summarize what you read instead of trying to summarize as you write. Also, please replace the Wikipedia source with something better.

# [[WTO]] - CP - Please expand the history section to include [http://www.wto.org/english/thewto_e/whatis_e/tif_e/fact4_e.htm this page]. There are also many other pages under "basics" in the side bar (click the plus beside to it expand) that would be helpful to include. In addition, this page could also use a "WTO and ICANN" section. Many possible sources come up upon googling. As a sidenote, a good way to avoid plagiarism is to read everything before you start writing, and then summarize what you read instead of trying to summarize as you write. Also, please replace the Wikipedia source with something better.

# [[W3Bank Internet Teknolojileri]] - The company URL doesn't work, and is da.ru really an accurate source?

# [[TrafficClub.com]] - CP

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 # [[Westlake Consulting]]-CP - please add references for the end of the WCL and ICANN section
 # [[Yahoo]]-CP - History of Yahoo section needs to be expanded. "Afterwards, Yahoo! never looked back." etc is not adequate. Please do the research. A good way to build this section is to find out when Yahoo acquired all of the companies listed in the acquisitions section. Please do not use Wikipedia as a source. Also, I think Yahoo has more services than just the ones you listed.
-# [[WTO]] - CP - Please expand the history section to include [http://www.wto.org/english/thewto_e/whatis_e/tif_e/fact4_e.htm this page]. There are also many other pages under "basics" in the side bar (click the plus beside to it expand) that would be helpful to include. In addition, this page could also use a "WTO and ICANN" section. Many possible sources come up upon googling. As a sidenote, a good way to avoid plagiarization is to read everything before you start writing, and then summarize what you read instead of trying to summarize as you write. Also, please replace the Wikipedia source with something better.
+# [[WTO]] - CP - Please expand the history section to include [http://www.wto.org/english/thewto_e/whatis_e/tif_e/fact4_e.htm this page]. There are also many other pages under "basics" in the side bar (click the plus beside to it expand) that would be helpful to include. In addition, this page could also use a "WTO and ICANN" section. Many possible sources come up upon googling. As a sidenote, a good way to avoid plagiarism is to read everything before you start writing, and then summarize what you read instead of trying to summarize as you write. Also, please replace the Wikipedia source with something better.
 # [[W3Bank Internet Teknolojileri]] - The company URL doesn't work, and is da.ru really an accurate source?
 # [[TrafficClub.com]] - CP