User talk:Ray: Difference between revisions

Revision as of 21:20, 20 September 2010

Let me know if there is anything else you want me to do with the Fabulous.com article, ok? Should I ass a "people" section? I think you took that section out of the MarkMonitior article.

Also worked on the eNom article. made it more neutral (I see what you mean!) and deleted some of the more superfluous sentences. Changed the placement of the logo too, but left everything else. Wasn't sure if I should take anything else out.

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-Yay! I saw that you put in the category: companies, but I don't know how to use it ... Please take a look. - M
+Let me know if there is anything else you want me to do with the Fabulous.com article, ok? Should I ass a "people" section? I think you took that section out of the MarkMonitior article.
-I like this feature!
+Also worked on the eNom article. made it more neutral (I see what you mean!) and deleted some of the more superfluous sentences. Changed the placement of the logo too, but left everything else. Wasn't sure if I should take anything else out.