Changes

Focus on what's important as far as services, what seems extraordinary or unique. No need to have a long list that nobody wants to read, but you should have the general make-up of the company's business profile. Same for the awards, pick some of those that seem the most unique or extraordinary, then summarize ("They have won awards for their services and workplace consistently for the past decade" or something) and then link to the full list. Make it as complete as necessary without putting too much spin on it, if you copy EVERYTHING they do then it may seem like it was an article created by them for marketing purposes. [[User:Andrew|Andrew]]

Focus on what's important as far as services, what seems extraordinary or unique. No need to have a long list that nobody wants to read, but you should have the general make-up of the company's business profile. Same for the awards, pick some of those that seem the most unique or extraordinary, then summarize ("They have won awards for their services and workplace consistently for the past decade" or something) and then link to the full list. Make it as complete as necessary without putting too much spin on it, if you copy EVERYTHING they do then it may seem like it was an article created by them for marketing purposes. [[User:Andrew|Andrew]]