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===Public Comments Final Report===

===Public Comments Final Report===

On January 20, 2023, ICANN Org released its final report on the 14 submissions it received. The summary identified several key themes, including:  

On January 20, 2023, ICANN Org released its final report on the 14 submissions it received. The summary identified several key themes, including:  

# the need for clarification in sections 2, 3, 5, 6, 7, 9, 10, 12, and addendum I.  

# the need for clarification in sections 2, 3, 5, 6, 7, 9, 10, 12, and addendums I and II.  

# areas in the drafted policy language did not accurately reflect the policy recommendations, such as "processing" in sections 1, the "scope" in section 2, the entirety of section 2.2, section 3.8-3.10, and "consent" and "personal data" as they relate to the GDPR, the timeline in section 4, updates to section 5 to reflect events that have happened in the meanwhile, the use of "must" in sections 6, 7, 8, and 9, the use of "urgent" in section 10,

# areas in the drafted policy language did not accurately reflect the policy recommendations, such as "processing" in sections 1, the "scope" in section 2, the entirety of section 2.2, sections 3.8-3.10, and "consent" and "personal data" as they relate to the GDPR, the timeline in section 4, updates to section 5 to reflect events that have happened in the meanwhile, the use of "must" in sections 6, 7, 8, and 9, the use of "urgent," the proposed deadlines, and the lack of explanation for circumstances under which a request must be considered in section 10, issues with the specifics of logging in section 11, and the "minimum retention period" in section 12.

==References==

==References==

[[Category:EPDPs]]

[[Category:EPDPs]]