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# the need for clarification in sections 2, 3, 5, 6, 7, 9, 10, 12, and addendums I and II.  

# the need for clarification in sections 2, 3, 5, 6, 7, 9, 10, 12, and addendums I and II.  

# areas in the drafted policy language did not accurately reflect the policy recommendations, such as "processing" in sections 1, the "scope" in section 2, the entirety of section 2.2, sections 3.8-3.10, and "consent" and "personal data" as they relate to the GDPR, the timeline in section 4, updates to section 5 to reflect events that have happened in the meanwhile, the use of "must" in sections 6, 7, 8, and 9, the use of "urgent," the proposed deadlines, and the lack of explanation for circumstances under which a request must be considered in section 10, issues with the specifics of logging in section 11, and the "minimum retention period" in section 12.

# areas in the drafted policy language did not accurately reflect the policy recommendations, such as "processing" in sections 1, the "scope" in section 2, the entirety of section 2.2, sections 3.8-3.10, and "consent" and "personal data" as they relate to the GDPR, the timeline in section 4, updates to section 5 to reflect events that have happened in the meanwhile, the use of "must" in sections 6, 7, 8, and 9, the use of "urgent," the proposed deadlines, and the lack of explanation for circumstances under which a request must be considered in section 10, issues with the specifics of logging in section 11, and the "minimum retention period" in section 12.

# the need to correct some of the redlines in the Additional Whois information Policy, the [[ERRP]], the [[Protection of IGO and INGO Identifiers in All gTLDs Policy|Protection of IGO and INGO Identifiers]], the CL&D Policy, the Thick Whois Transition Policy, the [[Transfer [[FOA]] and initial authorization, the [[TDRP]], the [[Inter-Registrar Transfer Policy|Transfer Policy]], [[UDRP]]-related documents, the [[Whois Data Reminder Policy]] (WDRP) Rules, and [[RDAP]]-related documents.

# the need to correct some of the redlines in the Additional Whois information Policy, the [[ERRP]], the [[Protection of IGO and INGO Identifiers in All gTLDs Policy|Protection of IGO and INGO Identifiers]], the CL&D Policy, the Thick Whois Transition Policy, the Transfer [[FOA]] and initial authorization, the [[TDRP]], the [[Inter-Registrar Transfer Policy|Transfer Policy]], [[UDRP]]-related documents, the [[Whois Data Reminder Policy]] (WDRP) Rules, and [[RDAP]]-related documents.

ICANN Org interpreted and summarized the public comments as outlining clarifications needed on requirements for the transfer of specific registration data from registrar to registry and the impact on the Thick WHOIS Transition Policy, changes needed to processing requirements for administrative and technical contact data elements and disclosure requirements, ensuring the Registration Data Policy is consistent with amended [[RA]] and [[RAA]], and updates to reflect the November 2022 adoption of The Network and Information Security ([[NIS2]]) Directive.<ref>[https://itp.cdn.icann.org/en/files/contracted-parties/public-comment-summary-report-registration-data-consensus-policy-gtlds-20-01-2023-en.pdf Public Comment Summary Report on Proposed Reg Data Consensus Policy, ICANN]</ref>

ICANN Org interpreted and summarized the public comments as outlining clarifications needed on requirements for the transfer of specific registration data from registrar to registry and the impact on the Thick WHOIS Transition Policy, changes needed to processing requirements for administrative and technical contact data elements and disclosure requirements, ensuring the Registration Data Policy is consistent with amended [[RA]] and [[RAA]], and updates to reflect the November 2022 adoption of The Network and Information Security ([[NIS2]]) Directive.<ref>[https://itp.cdn.icann.org/en/files/contracted-parties/public-comment-summary-report-registration-data-consensus-policy-gtlds-20-01-2023-en.pdf Public Comment Summary Report on Proposed Reg Data Consensus Policy, ICANN]</ref>