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| # [[Rachida]] - find her full name and then search for any more info. AM | | # [[Rachida]] - find her full name and then search for any more info. AM |
| # [[Mia Ceran]] -AM | | # [[Mia Ceran]] -AM |
− | # [[Ricardo Dias]]- explain what FCCN is. AM | + | # [[Ricardo Dias]]- explain what FCCN is. AM (Done) |
| # [[Ricardo Abril]]- AM | | # [[Ricardo Abril]]- AM |
− | # [[Ricardo Presta]]- Clarify what RCC and Gre are. (found in intro & last paragraph). AM | + | # [[Ricardo Presta]]- Clarify what RCC and Gre are. (found in intro & last paragraph). AM (Done) |
| # [[Nora Cotter]]-AM | | # [[Nora Cotter]]-AM |
| # [[Joseph Leung]]- Does he currently work for AsiaPay? The intro should always make very clear what a person's current role is. Please clarify. | | # [[Joseph Leung]]- Does he currently work for AsiaPay? The intro should always make very clear what a person's current role is. Please clarify. |
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| # [[Mustafa Yakub]]-AM stub | | # [[Mustafa Yakub]]-AM stub |
| # [[Muhammad Aslam]]-AM | | # [[Muhammad Aslam]]-AM |
− | # [[Matt Embrescia]]-Note how you have so many sections with only one sentence in each? Try to fix this, eliminate certain sections, combine if need be, see if you can't find a better solution. | + | # [[Matt Embrescia]]-Note how you have so many sections with only one sentence in each? Try to fix this, eliminate certain sections, combine if need be, see if you can't find a better solution. (Done) |
| # [[Normand Fortier]]-AM | | # [[Normand Fortier]]-AM |
| # [[Maurice Tola]]-AM | | # [[Maurice Tola]]-AM |
− | # [[Mactar Seck]]-Clarify intro, the acronyms make it confusing. | + | # [[Mactar Seck]]-Clarify intro, the acronyms make it confusing. (Done) |
| # [[Michelle Sng]]-AM | | # [[Michelle Sng]]-AM |
− | # [[Monica Abalo]]-Fix photo issues | + | # [[Monica Abalo]]-Fix photo issues. (Done) |
| # [[Milton Kaoru Kashiwakura]]- Put list in chronological order and clarify the acronyms in the intro | | # [[Milton Kaoru Kashiwakura]]- Put list in chronological order and clarify the acronyms in the intro |
| # [[Minjung Park]]-AM | | # [[Minjung Park]]-AM |
| # [[Steven Baldridge]]-AM | | # [[Steven Baldridge]]-AM |