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i have added the 2nd set of articles, can u please check and give me a feed back on that. Thank you. --[[User:Pulasthi|Pulasthi]] 01:37, 7 February 2011 (PST)
i have added the 2nd set of articles, can u please check and give me a feed back on that. Thank you. --[[User:Pulasthi|Pulasthi]] 01:37, 7 February 2011 (PST)
==Second Batch==
Okay, so I've scanned through your entire batch and was hoping that you could fix a few things; it seems that you frequently copy and paste from one reference and use that as the finished article. This is just not the kind of work we're looking for, as we're looking to compile enough sources to make the information new; rather than just continue the spread of the same stuff. You're first batch was an exciting introduction, as you showed some great determination and initiative; however, it seems in the second batch that you have focused on creating articles quickly rather than writing your own articles.
I hope that you are able to go back through the batch and add some references and put the material into your own words. For an example of what I am saying see the article for [[Misha Halvarsson]] - it seems your version was mainly copied over from [http://www.namesatwork.com/about/nameswork-team/misha-halvarsson] - which was one of your two sources. Compare your version to the version that I completed by looking at the history of the article. I was able to rewrite the article, and also add one more reference.
The important part is that you're not copying and pasting, and that you're using all applicable references.
To further illustrate what I'm getting at, look at the article for [[Milton Mueller]], this article is once again copied over from your one reference. Again, we don't want to offer readers the same pages that other sites do. You could easily re-work and build on this article. A search of Milton turns up some great stuff, in fact the first google return shows that he has written more than 25 academic papers regarding ICANN -exactly the kind of stuff we are looking for that was unfortunately left out of your article. (see: [http://faculty.ischool.syr.edu/mueller/])
I realize that you could just be copying the information over from the old ICANNWiki.org site, and not meaning to necessarily copy and paste from outside sources. However, if you were doing comprehensive searches you would likely run into the information and realize its origin.
So, please, if you could take another look at your articles and clear up the issue of copied information. Remember, bringing in more searches will only make creating an original article easier.
'''TIPS''' I also realize that you've dove quickly into the project and shown a good work ethic, and I appreciate it. I'll lay out a tip or two now to try to help improve your results:
'''1.)'''So, it may seem difficult to rewrite other information into your own words; try making copying and pasting a part of your process but not your final result. That is, find a good set of about 4 articles, find the relevant info, copy it, and paste it into the edit page of the ICANNWiki article. Then you will have a collection of all the important info in front of you and you can focus on highlighting the most important info in your own words; this will eliminate switching back and forth between tabs and trying to rework tough ideas in your head. Then create a ref links for all the pages you used to create your own article.
'''2.)''' By creating new sections in the article you are more easily able to create a unique piece of work. If you're having trouble rewriting your sources into one article look at it in a different way; ask yourself how you could break up the information and create different sections within the article to make your work stand out as original.
'''2.)'''Also, focus your searches on ICANN - I found the extra [[Misha Halvarsson]] reference by searching for "Misha Halvarsson ICANN", the more specific you get the better your results. Search for the person in conjunction with their company, or within certain organizational bodies.
I will be reworking the introductory pages on "how to write a good person" article soon, but if you haven't checked that page out yet, it is still a good resource. [http://icannwiki.com/index.php/How_to_create_a_great_person_article]
Please send me any questions, I'm here to help. I just know that given the heavy workload that you have so strongly taken on that you can make some improvements on this batch, and that you can become a great, and continued, writer for the site! Thanks for the work thus far, [[User:Andrew|Andrew]]