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Okay, so I've scanned through your entire batch and was hoping that you could fix a few things; it seems that you frequently copy and paste from one reference and use that as the finished article. This is just not the kind of work we're looking for, as we're looking to compile enough sources to make the information new; rather than just continue the spread of the same stuff. You're first batch was an exciting introduction, as you showed some great determination and initiative; however, it seems in the second batch that you have focused on creating articles quickly rather than writing your own articles.

Okay, so I've scanned through your entire batch and was hoping that you could fix a few things; it seems that you frequently copy and paste from one reference and use that as the finished article. This is just not the kind of work we're looking for, as we're looking to compile enough sources to make the information new; rather than just continue the spread of the same stuff. You're first batch was an exciting introduction, as you showed some great determination and initiative; however, it seems in the second batch that you have focused on creating articles quickly rather than writing your own articles.

I hope that you are able to go  back through the batch and add some references and put the material into your own words. For an example of what I am saying see the article for [[Misha Halvarsson]] - it seems your version was mainly copied over from [http://www.namesatwork.com/about/nameswork-team/misha-halvarsson] - which was one of your two sources. Compare your version to the version that I completed by looking at the history of the article. I was able to rewrite the article, and also add one more reference.  

I hope that you are able to go  back through the batch and add some references and put the material into your own words. For an example of what I am saying see the article for [[Misha Halvarsson]] - it seems your version was mainly copied over from [http://www.namesatwork.com/about/nameswork-team/misha-halvarsson names@work] - which was one of your two sources. Compare your version to the version that I completed by looking at the history of the article. I was able to rewrite the article, and also add one more reference.  

The important part is that you're not copying and pasting, and that you're using all applicable references.  

The important part is that you're not copying and pasting, and that you're using all applicable references.