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==Past Experiences==
 
==Past Experiences==
Michael Gilmour's first job was with Melbourne House, as part of the team that developed the games "Lord of the Rings" and "Mugsy's Revenge" and later on through reverse engineering managed to work on an early version of Nintendo. <ref>[http://www.dnjournal.com/cover/2008/november.htm Early stages of Michael's career]</ref>
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Michael Gilmour's first job was with Melbourne House, as part of the team that developed the games "Lord of the Rings" and "Mugsy's Revenge"; he later worked on an early version of Nintendo. <ref>[http://www.dnjournal.com/cover/2008/november.htm Early stages of Michael's career]</ref>
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Later on he created an online psychographic marketing that was used by a popular TV program for broadcasting alert messages directly for people's PCs. But, due to an unfortunate event, he lost all his investment and had to close the business. <ref>[http://www.dnjournal.com/cover/2008/november.htm Michael's career]</ref>  
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Later on he created an online psychographic marketing that was used by a popular TV program for broadcasting alert messages directly to peoples' PCs. But, due to an unfortunate event, he lost all his investment and had to close the business.<ref>[http://www.dnjournal.com/cover/2008/november.htm Michael's career]</ref>
    
==Current Projects==
 
==Current Projects==