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# [[Joe Kraus]]- With all those interviews (specifically the Q&A/general interviews not addressing technical topics) I hope you could pull out some more information about Joe. AM
 
# [[Joe Kraus]]- With all those interviews (specifically the Q&A/general interviews not addressing technical topics) I hope you could pull out some more information about Joe. AM
 
# [[Johannes K. Chiang]]- Use pronouns. Note how strange it looks to have EVERY sentence start with his full name. AM
 
# [[Johannes K. Chiang]]- Use pronouns. Note how strange it looks to have EVERY sentence start with his full name. AM
# [[John L Clarke III]]- Use pronouns. Same note as above.
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# [[John L Clarke III]]- Use pronouns. Same note as above. AM
 
# [[Jon Hollstrom]]-AM
 
# [[Jon Hollstrom]]-AM
# [[Jon Peterson]]
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# [[Jon Peterson]]- Remove excessive "Jon...Jon...Jon...", use pronouns (he), his full name, and the title Mr. Peterson to switch it up.
 
# [[Jon Ramer]]
 
# [[Jon Ramer]]
 
# [[Jon Steinhart]]
 
# [[Jon Steinhart]]

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