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Yes, That is fine. Still, I will edit some of your articles to show you exactly what we're looking for and walk you through the changes that need to be made. This will help you write and research the rest of the content. [[User:Andrew|Andrew]]
Yes, That is fine. Still, I will edit some of your articles to show you exactly what we're looking for and walk you through the changes that need to be made. This will help you write and research the rest of the content. [[User:Andrew|Andrew]]
==NOTE==
I have edited you ICANN article 2. One of biggest issues is the lack of references, I am looking now and it seems I may not have explained how to reference. Referencing needs to happen after every substantial section of the article, and should be used whenever you have taken information from another source (not copying and pasting, we don't copy and paste). It is done like this:
ICANN 2 was held in Berlin, Germany.<nowiki><ref>[www.PUT_LINK_HERE.whatever Make Space and Explain Link]</ref></nowiki>
SO first you have the ref brackets, then you have the link, and after the link make one space and explain what the link is, if it is icann.org/meetings, just write that out again in short form (i.e., leave off the www. and all the extra code at the end, just explain the link simply)
Please implement these in all of your articles. We usually do not do many external links, and it seems you may have been using those instead of references. I'm sorry I didn't address this earlier.
Other issues:
- No need to explain what ICANN is, that is what the ICANN page is for, this is just for the meeting
- Do not explain or talk about what information you cannot find, focus on what you know.
Now, it could be helpful to see my changes, look [http://icannwiki.com/index.php?title=ICANN_2&action=history here]. You can select to look at your version compared against my edits. This way you can [http://icannwiki.com/index.php?title=ICANN_2&action=historysubmit&diff=54564&oldid=52636 see] what I have deleted and what I have changed.
Let me know if you have further questions and please keep these edits in mind.
...Also the ICANN 2 article comes to an abrupt end, and there is no info on the third day of the meeting, please look into adding more information.
[[User:Andrew|Andrew]]