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==Changes==
==Changes==
Hi Abyss, please make note of the change in process for keeping track of your batches. There is a note on the [[Articles needed]] page explaining what is different. Thanks. [[User:Caterina|Caterina]]
Hi Abyss, please make note of the change in process for keeping track of your batches. There is a note on the [[Articles needed]] page explaining what is different. Thanks. [[User:Caterina|Caterina]]
==Editing==
I hope to finish editing your last batch today. Two consistent issues:
# Start every article with the person's name in '''bold''', you tend to forget the bolding, a small issue but it helps.
# It seems you need to work on pronoun use and switching up how you refer to a person to make an article more readable. I don't know if this will be difficult, please let me know if you need more guidance than what is already written on your user page.
Your articles are good, and I we'll both benefit in taking some time to work on your pronoun use to make your written english more engaging. Good work! Thanks for your attention to these matters. [[User:Andrew|Andrew]]