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got your note, please feel free to work on the [[Directi]] article until you feel you've done what you can. Leave the PIR article alone for now since someone else is working on that and I want to give them a chance to get it right. Thx [[User:Ray|Ray]]
got your note, please feel free to work on the [[Directi]] article until you feel you've done what you can. Leave the PIR article alone for now since someone else is working on that and I want to give them a chance to get it right. Thx [[User:Ray|Ray]]
== Dotster Article ==
Two thoughts:
* Can you make the article as [[NPOV]] as possible. i.e. when I read "Web and 'Happy Hour' is our way of giving back", I assume that this is text copied from their website and in their words.
* Also, is the Happy Hour thing really that significant to take up that much of the article? Have we covered other important facets of the company? [[User:Ray|Ray]]