Anaya.writer

Joined 18 April 2011
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# [[Clarity Consulting]]- try breaking up those big first paragraphs and making them into their own sections.
 
# [[Clarity Consulting]]- try breaking up those big first paragraphs and making them into their own sections.
 
# [[Computerwire]]-CP - Your references don't seem to be accurate. I can't find much of the information you have written in the links. Make sure your references accurately reflect the information you have written. It is important that this be done properly.
 
# [[Computerwire]]-CP - Your references don't seem to be accurate. I can't find much of the information you have written in the links. Make sure your references accurately reflect the information you have written. It is important that this be done properly.
# [[Cordance]] - What is OASIS? explain.
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# [[Cordance]] - What is OASIS? explain. [OASIS explained(Anaya)]
 
# [[Council of Country Code Administrators]]- These are some stats worth mentioning [http://www.mindsandmachines.com/systems/espresso-cocca/ here], also explain the connection between the org and Minds + Machines/[[Antony Van Couvering]]
 
# [[Council of Country Code Administrators]]- These are some stats worth mentioning [http://www.mindsandmachines.com/systems/espresso-cocca/ here], also explain the connection between the org and Minds + Machines/[[Antony Van Couvering]]
 
# [[DarkBlueSea.com]]- There are not enough references in this article (the whole middle section is missing them), and that makes me worry about copy and paste issues. please fix
 
# [[DarkBlueSea.com]]- There are not enough references in this article (the whole middle section is missing them), and that makes me worry about copy and paste issues. please fix
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