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==Batch 1==
 
==Batch 1==
 
# [[CityLink]]-AM
 
# [[CityLink]]-AM
# [[Clarity Consulting]]- try breaking up those big first paragraphs and making them into their own sections.
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# [[Clarity Consulting]]- AM
# [[Computerwire]]-CP - Your references don't seem to be accurate. I can't find much of the information you have written in the links. Make sure your references accurately reflect the information you have written. It is important that this be done properly.
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# [[Computerwire]]-AM
# [[Cordance]] - What is OASIS? explain.'''[OASIS explained(Anaya)]'''
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# [[Cordance]] - AM
# [[Council of Country Code Administrators]]- These are some stats worth mentioning [http://www.mindsandmachines.com/systems/espresso-cocca/ here], also explain the connection between the org and Minds + Machines/[[Antony Van Couvering]]'''[Done(Anaya)]'''
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# [[Council of Country Code Administrators]]- AM
# [[DarkBlueSea.com]]- There are not enough references in this article (the whole middle section is missing them), and that makes me worry about copy and paste issues. please fix
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# [[DarkBlueSea.com]]-AM
 
# [[DNForum.com]]-AM
 
# [[DNForum.com]]-AM
# [[Consulintel]]- Please note the marketing spin that this article has as is. While there may not be many other sources available, the article pretty much turns out as a copy of the site, with identical lists from their site repoduced on ours. This is a tricky area. I will soon delete some of the offending sections so you can see how to make an article from a better Neutral Point of View. -AM
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# [[Consulintel]]- AM
 
# [[Easy Internet Services]]-AM
 
# [[Easy Internet Services]]-AM
 
# [[Core Competence]]-AM
 
# [[Core Competence]]-AM
# [[EDventure Holdings, Inc]]- Good article. Please include information on Esther Dyson's history with ICANN
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# [[EDventure Holdings, Inc]]-AM
# [[Datacenter Group]]- Use the logo found [http://www.thedatacentergroup.nl/ here], as the current one is for the wrong division of the company. Use [http://investing.businessweek.com/research/stocks/private/person.asp?personId=82216680&privcapId=81947089&previousCapId=38840049&previousTitle=EuroDNS%20S.A. this], and other similar sources to get some history on the company's founding and its ties to [[Xavier Buck]].'''[Edited(Anaya)]'''
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# [[Datacenter Group]]- AM
# [[VoipGATE]]-CP - Most sections are lacking references. Please fix.'''[References added(Anaya)]'''
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# [[VoipGATE]]-AM
# [[DomainCocoon]]-CP - Deleted irrelevant and marketing information.
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# [[DomainCocoon]]-CP
 
# [[Domain Capital]]-CP
 
# [[Domain Capital]]-CP
 
# [[Dipcon]]-CP
 
# [[Dipcon]]-CP
 
# [[Dot FM]]-CP
 
# [[Dot FM]]-CP
# [[Dreams Online]]-CP - first section needs referencing. '''[Added references(Anaya)]'''
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# [[Dreams Online]]-AM
 
# [[Diversinet]]-CP
 
# [[Diversinet]]-CP
# [[DomainMart]]-CP - references needed. '''[References added(Anaya)]'''
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# [[DomainMart]]-AM
# [[DomainTheNet]]-AM
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# [[Domain The Net]]-AM
 
# [[DotMobi]]-AM
 
# [[DotMobi]]-AM
 
# [[DotPH]]-AM
 
# [[DotPH]]-AM
# [[DomainPeople]]- I'm confused about why you cited each accredited registrar with their homepage. The important reference is the one where you learned that DomainPeople is accredited by VeriSign, Afilias, PIR, etc. [http://www.circleid.com/members/2043 This] has some good info worth including (8th accredited registrar, etc.). '''[Edited(Anaya)]'''
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# [[DomainPeople]]- AM
 
# [[DotAlliance]]-AM
 
# [[DotAlliance]]-AM
# [[DotBerlin]]-AM
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# [[DotBERLIN]]-AM
 
# [[DomainNameWire.com]]-CP  
 
# [[DomainNameWire.com]]-CP  
# [[DotVN]]-This has reference problems; THe technology Partners section is once again refs to the partners site, not the site that states that they are partners. One entire section is also missing references. '''[references added and rectified(Anaya)]'''
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# [[DotVN]]-AM
# [[Domaindiscount24]]-Please don't cite our own site as a source (#3), you can use us as a resource to find sources, but it must be clear that all our resources come from somewhere on the Internet and not just "because we said so" '''[icannwiki source replaced(Anaya)]'''
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# [[Domaindiscount24]]
 
# [[Domaininfo]]-AM
 
# [[Domaininfo]]-AM
 
# [[Dot TK]]-AM
 
# [[Dot TK]]-AM
 
# [[DomainRegistry.com Inc.]]-AM
 
# [[DomainRegistry.com Inc.]]-AM
# [[Dynamic Network Services, Inc.]]- Needs references
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# [[Dynamic Network Services, Inc.]]- AM
# [[Comodo]]- Given the fact that we don't cit our own wiki, we also don't cite the famous Wikipedia.org; we know this is a great resource, and we use it to start our research, but it should not be cited as a source, instead follow WIkipedia's source links to get to the actual information.'''[wikipedia source changed(Anaya)]'''
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# [[Comodo]]- AM
 
# [[DomainNews]]-AM
 
# [[DomainNews]]-AM
# [[EBay]]- Please fix the wikipedia references by finding a legitimate source from the wiki page or elsewhere on the internet. Also, please include an ICANN section; using sources found when googling "eBay ICANN" '''[wikipedia references fixed(Anaya)]'''
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# [[EBay]]- AM
 
# [[DomainIt]]-AM
 
# [[DomainIt]]-AM
# [[Vendare Media]]- Replace ICANNWiki.com sources  '''[have replaced icannwiki sources and have added more sources (Anaya)]'''
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# [[Vendare Media]]- AM
 
# [[YesDirect]]-AM
 
# [[YesDirect]]-AM
 
# [[WEBCC]]-AM
 
# [[WEBCC]]-AM
# [[Westlake Consulting]]-CP - please add references for the end of the WCL and ICANN section '''[references added(Anaya)]'''
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# [[Westlake Consulting]]-AM
# [[Yahoo]]-CP - History of Yahoo section needs to be expanded. "Afterwards, Yahoo! never looked back." etc is not adequate. Please do the research. A good way to build this section is to find out when Yahoo acquired all of the companies listed in the acquisitions section. Please do not use Wikipedia as a source. Also, I think Yahoo has more services than just the ones you listed.'''[More info added(Anaya)]'''
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# [[Yahoo]]-CP - AM
# [[WTO]] - CP - Please expand the history section to include [http://www.wto.org/english/thewto_e/whatis_e/tif_e/fact4_e.htm this page]. There are also many other pages under "basics" in the side bar (click the plus beside to it expand) that would be helpful to include. In addition, this page could also use a "WTO and ICANN" section. Many possible sources come up upon googling. As a sidenote, a good way to avoid plagiarism is to read everything before you start writing, and then summarize what you read instead of trying to summarize as you write. Also, please replace the Wikipedia source with something better.'''[More info added(Anaya)]'''
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# [[WTO]] - CP -AM
# [[W3Bank Internet Teknolojileri]] - The company URL doesn't work, and is da.ru really an accurate source?
 
 
# [[TrafficClub.com]] - CP
 
# [[TrafficClub.com]] - CP
# [[DN Sale Price]]-CP - intro paragraph needs more references. '''[more references added(Anaya)]'''
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# [[DN Sale Price]]-AM
 
# [[Zeno Group]]-CP
 
# [[Zeno Group]]-CP
# [[WIPO]]-CP - The references in this article do not appear to match up with the information they are referencing. A good section to add would be the requirements for becoming a member state.
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# [[WIPO]]-AM
# [[WHIR]] - CP - needs more references---'''[more references added(Anaya)]'''
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# [[WHIR]] - AM
# [[TCRA]] - CP - find better source than Wikipedia---'''[have replaced Wikipedia source and have added some more references(Anaya)]'''
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# [[TCRA]] - AM
 
# [[Thomsen Trampedach]]
 
# [[Thomsen Trampedach]]
 
# [[TlNIC]] - Timor-Leste Network Information Center
 
# [[TlNIC]] - Timor-Leste Network Information Center
 
# [[TW-NIC]]
 
# [[TW-NIC]]
 
# [[Webhosting.info]]
 
# [[Webhosting.info]]

Latest revision as of 23:33, 9 February 2012